It will hurt but only for awhile.
Keep the pain inside and try your best to smile.
The world won’t believe you.
People will always leave.
Lilac cravings bring you comfort,
Hidden within your skin.
I never meant to hurt you
By making you believe that all is well.
Never meant to hide from,
This truth I could not tell.
The world around us is painful
People never seem to stay.
I only hope you give me time
To correct every lie till today.
Lilac cravings bring you comfort
Hidden within your skin
Reminding you that all things
Must come to a grave end.
I never meant to touch you
To show you what true love was
Never meant to hold you in my arms,
Have you experience such warmth
Never my intention to bring you all this pain.
To show you that the world is cruel
And people rarely stay.
Close your eyes and remember me.
Remember the love we shared
Remember the times we laughed.
That I showed you what it felt like to care
Color me inside your soul.
Leave me there to fester deep.
Like a wound on your heart
You will always keep.
Lilac scars may cover you
Hidden from the world
But please remember the times we shared
Yes this world may be full of suffering
And people lie with glee
Yes in the end I hurt you most
Because I also had to leave
But please don’t forget us
Don’t forget our love
I never truly left you dear
I am always in your heart.
Thank you for your candid review of “A Twist in the Myth” on AFF. I can certainly understand your view that Chapter 1 is a somewhat boring one; I hope you find the following chapters more interesting.
Truthfully, I didn’t rely only on my memory when writing it. I had several volumes of the manga to use as reference and I also consulted the InuYasha fan wiki. Of course, being an eventual crossover with Marvel’s Avengers, “ATitM” will deviate significantly from the canon story, but I wanted it to be firmly grounded in the source material anyway.
I look forward into reading what you have ^-^.
All the best stories have a slow start which is why I continue with it.
I am sorry if it came out a little harsh though. Sometimes it is hard to write a review and keep my tone neutral. It is something I am working on.
Thank you for your candid review of “A Twist in the Myth” on AFF. I can certainly understand your view of Chapter 1 as a boring one, and I hope you’ll find the following ones more exciting.
Truthfully, I didn’t rely on just my memory as I wrote. I had several printed volumes of the manga to use as reference and I also consulted the InuYasha fan wiki. Of course, “ATitM” will deviate significantly from the canon, but I wanted to make sure it was firmly grounded in the source material. Thanks for reading!